Seems a fair amount of pin wear. The problem with most clevis pins is they are as soft as doughnuts so in my view OK for extreme wear cases but you are on a mission to get it ready for the RBRR.
Fit a split pin in a different position on the carrier as Pete says, I did. Use the correct dowel bolt to align the bellhousing and see if it's any better. I used a normal bolt as it measured pretty much spot on but don't use fully threaded set bolt.
If its still noisy try singing when stationary 🎶 and have fun next week. Post us how you're getting on please.
Iain